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Love the art style, love the characters. Keep up the good work man. You're the first person I actually consider to donate to

sorry for late reply been busy, donations are always appreciated but i'm grateful to know my project drove you to that conclusion! 

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Is there any NTR things in this game?

The game is pretty much ntr, next game i'm planning will also have ntr but it can be optional (just not as many scenes lol)

Sadlly, it looks interesting but I dont have the 'resistance' about ntr genre.

no worries, I can't say if I'll change the formula for the future but I could have some other stuff besides ntr (just not as much though)

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Make it a zip please. The game isn't launching, a purple screen appears and then it closes immediately.

oh im sorry if you want you can try the link on my patreon for the free version since i have it there too

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It would be cool if we're the one who's doing the cucking.

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i agree cough cough nudge nudge

Add lactation content xD

Tried to play and the game screen remains black, and it says DEBUG up top, anyway to fix?

what system are you using

Windows 10, 64-bit operating system, x64-based processor

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Game Suggestions: This game has a lot of potential but right now I think a lot of it is wasted. Here a few ideas to implement that make the game better in my opinion.

1. Emersion: right now, there are just chapters you click trough doesn’t really feel like a conversation I have with my girl on a phone. Merge all chapters together and only have different contacts. There can be a way to load the different chapters to not restart every thing if you want to try something new.

2. Bug Fixing: I know bug fixing isn’t always easy but its really bad if the game just stops working and you have to close and restart the app every other minuet.

3. Build up: there should be a buildup try to establish a real relation ship with her. First show the love and affection and then slowly transition to the NTR. Also, its better in my opinion if she is trying to hide it more don’t let her spill out everything with his slightest concerns make it hard to discover her cheating and maybe let it be leaked by someone else if he takes to long to get behind it but is still concerned. There are many different ways to approach it and I think you can do it but try to build yourself a good foundation and make quality content rather then just a lot with many pictures. Let her tease him and try to convince him slowly that maybe it was his idea in the first place? Let her have a secret Instagram account with lewd Fotos with other guys? Many possibilities.

4. Better Gallery: Right now you have all fotos from the start make it that you unlock them while playing with a counter how many you collected so far. There could still be a cheat to unlock all if you want but don’t just let them all be there without doing anything.

5. Story: Try make different routes you already have it somewhat but right now those are more of single questions leading to single answers I could have seen her have sex 100times play dumb once and she plays as if I didn’t know what’s going on. On the other hand I could be playing the dumb route and have a single concern and she shows off everything like its nothing right now the sorry isn’t really a story. Change that make a few Clear paths maybe you will be able to switch and change them but if she thinks he believes her not doing stuff why would she shot him cheating once he askes a simple question of concern.

All this may only be my few but I’m still convinced it would help improve the game. This will take time and effort no questions asked I know how hard game development is but I trust in you to bring this game to glory. 

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yeha I agree with your 1st, 3rd and 5th point almost all phone pov games like this one  you can jump right to the action and the texting interactions make you feel like you're texting chatGPT who can't say no to you.

I really hope the developer take your opinion into consideration 

oh wow im sorry i've been pretty busy and didn't see this im sorry for that

1.I honestly like your chapter and contact idea, I think I might actually use this in the future because while i wasn't planning on working on this game for a few years I don't want it to reach like chapter 16, so I'm really grateful for this suggestion!

2.Believe it or not this is my highest prioty right now because trust me it's just as frustrating or probably more for me, knowing theres a lot of bugs and you can't fix them all. It is a gradual thing but I haven't recieved as much complaints from the spin off so I think that might've fixed a few things

3.I actually would've loved to do this but in the first version of my game there was an annoying glitch where the text will just go by really fast AND the screen kept going all the way to the top, so I had to make the first chapter fast so the player wouldn't get annoyed (it was a big problem i had no idea how to fix), while it sucks that had to happen and I couldn't go with my original plan I did try a soft reboot in chapter 4

4. I'm actually in the progress of improving this, I wanted it to be unlockable from the start but i'm gonna be honest. I think a bigger prioty is the foundational stuff before this because I want to add an undo button and skip button since a lot of people have been requesting it

5.thats more of a problem with the older chapters due to me not knowing how to properly write in dialogic but newer problems it is being actively fixed (or at least the best to my abilities) i want the player to feel like they have actual sway in the conversation and i'm trying new writing flows to see how i can closer get there

Thank you for your feedback! I really love this game and I only hope to improve while sometimes i get sad this is just called a cash crab, people like you remind me that other people love this project (or probably more) then me!

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Seams pretty buggy to me after compleating chapter 2 every thing stopped woring in terms of i could not play any chapter resetting didnt help 

also maybe make a bit of a slower build up and not go directly into the action

sorry to hear i thought I fixed that issue, are you on android or windows

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Windows

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Question, is there a difference between public and patreon versions of the game?

Yes! unless i put the patreon out on the public lol, Right now the only real difference is 3 more chapters and the gallery unlocked for said chapters. I plan on adding more on the future but right now I want to focus on the foundation of the game

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Is there a different download link? The itch link doesn't seem to work, downloader lays the file syntax is incorrect.

oh thats good, which version you talking about

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Windows

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great story, but i have some tips for you if you want it:

rollback mechanic;
save mechanic;

and thats it, thats what i think its essential in a novel game...

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you're gonna be happy next update :)

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just as an idea for a new game where you play as Felicia.

sure i'd love to hear your idea!

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my idea is simple it is a game focused on felicia's pov of the events shown in this game but have more options and your job is to put her in positions that corupr her into eventualy cheating.

I cannot start the game for the life of  me. Turned MS defender off, ran as admin, tried to unzip, updated every driver... I click run, and the app never starts,,, any tips?

i'm sorry but what do you mean try to unzip? you're on windows correct

Yes, but given my lack of success, and the instructions of "extract and run", I thought it might be a weird compressing file. But didn't work either. Tried unzipping, putting the .exe file inside the folder, running. No luck. I tried everything I can possibly think. No luck...  I appreciate you reaching out, though

I'm really sorry that instruction was meant for linux when it was a folder if you're on windows just download the exe and double click on it

Yeah, I do it, and no message, no image, nothing comes through. I have an AMD graphics card, if that makes a difference. I installed godot, I tried to open the game on the app too. 

The game looks awesome, and I have no clue if there is a command I should try, or if something else is blocking the game. Malwarebytes shows nothing, windows defender shows nothing, Nord VPN shows nothing.

i also have an amd driver, I play the game on linux,windows, and andriod so I'm really confused as to why this isn't working

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Cant't update on the Itch app, you fixed that with Chapter 4, but every other update wasn't downloadable.

I'm really sorry about that! it might be the way i exported it, I'll take a look and see whats different in the versions when it comes to export

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Add more fetishes, including lactation, gangbang and dp xD

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I'm really happy to hear you enjoy the game but remember to take breaks! I'm in the process of fixing up the gallary so maybe you won't have to do that everyday lol

oh they deleted the comment :(

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well, problem solved I guess

I'm sorry i thought i replied, did it?

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I was referring to the story problem, with the tender guy. so don't worry, so far I haven't found a bug or anything 👍

i know you were talking about the story problem

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"error! this device does not have vulkan support (black screen)" yeah ik my phone is ass I don't blame you tbh lmao, is this planned to be changed or not?

honestly I can look more into it but I did enable 32bit support but I'll see what more I can do, just kind of stuck with the newest version right now so plate is full 

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Ngl, not the first time crying over NTR games, just... It's not really relatable for me and it breaks my heart

But the thought that I can be involved in this irl scares me and this is like an example how you shouldn't do :) 

The controls on the phone are kind of inconvenient and some text is missing, but that's okay, like, It's a good small novel, but now I am crying over the ending where the guy fucks both of the girls ;-;

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I'm sorry to hear it made you cry :(, i understand its not for everyone as for the controls being wonky I'm making an active effort to clean it up 

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Oh, no need to be sorry, that's okay, I saw the tags and went for it by myself 

You did a great work anyways, waiting for version 1.0 prolly :D 

1.0 will be the finale of this demo, I'll do something drastic in 1.1 yall wont expect

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holy Maribel

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I'm glad you like it

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Bless

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Hello love the game! But the bar in the chat Its totally bugged for me. I need to scrow it every new message!

plus, you game its soo good it doenst need to burn so fast, I would like to see Felicia be kind and soft, and not aways mean! 

Anyways success, if need any help with script I would love to help!

hey man is this bugged or what? I open the game and a black screen comes up and then noting happens

it might be because you have an older phone but don't worry this new update aims to fix that

i was on my laptop and it is able to run gta5, so i don't think that it should have any issue with your game

qh ok, usually when I'm told it doesn't work it comes from old phones so my apologies, i'm not sure what the issue would be besides the anti virus because of godot for some reason 

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I legit had a relationship like this with some tinder girl and this game made my blood boil in the same way (but turned on) in the same way. Which means you did a good job with the pacing. Would love options to eventually call her out on her BS (maybe send a pic of ourselves having some fun ;)


never again tbh with hoes who play games. But this is great!

I'm glad you enjoy! I'm actually gonna revise the first chapter since a big complaint I got was the pace of it but thank you really!

How the f*** are you suppose to start a new game!!? Play ch1 and I want to play it again but no. Doesn't give you any clue as to how to a new game!?

hmm sorry about that, I swear I left instructions on how to reset chat, basically go to messages and click on the gear icon to the top right,  there's  a reset button in there, i'll try to make things more clear next update

Thank you!

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I like Felicia and the overall concept of the game but I have a problem with the narrative. While there is more cohesion in chapter 4, the rest of the dialogues feel rather rushed and sometimes nonsensical. Maybe it's just me and I apologize if that's the case. I would like to know more about Felicia, her boyfriend and so, before jumping into the hot stuff, maybe develop her escapades a bit more.

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I think I am gonna make an FAQ with this question, the current versions of 0.1 to 1.0 are the "demo" timeline because I'm basically fleshing out felicia right now as well as fixing/improving the code for the game, once I reach 1.1, felicia along with the canon will be reset. right now I just want people to understand what I am trying to go for, it also helps me improve the game and my writing before the canon officially starts! I hope that answers your question and no need to apologize, I get this question a lot lol

Well, I try hard. No play protect on  CH, install unknown apps, Zarchiver....with Xiaomi Redmi 9C.  Try every updated,. Yeah, thank for your hard work.

I'm sorry but this seems to be a hardware issue with you rather then my game or ntr phone game 

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Alr thanks

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yo im also on a redmi 9c and i think it doesn't work because our phones doesn't support 64 bit games

hello good news! the new export of the game I am going to release does include support for 32 bit so that should hopefully help

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what a cliffhanger. I hope that when Felicia finds out she does like the Dr. Manhattan meme to the Tender Guy

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I'm glad you like the cliffhanger! I have no idea how to read anything else after that tho 

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I mean when Felicia finds out that the Tenderguy blocked HER boyfriend she goes mad and evaporates him like in the Dr. Manhattan meme.

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oh i remember that meme lol

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Yeah like "How dare you?!" and puff xd

It doesn't work on Android everytime try to download this its said can't install this app.

hey! i just downloaded it on my android and its working fine, are u perhaps using an older phone?

Ive been curious about this game for a bit now but it wont let me download it on android, i domt have an old phone and all my settings should be fine, just no clue whats going on :/

hi! I'm really sorry i didnt see this message could you elaborate more?

Well all i know is that it pops up with a message saying 'Failed to download' and will show me Zero reasons as to why, i was just curious if it was a common thing really, and no problem with a slow reply!

some other guy had the same problem and it sounds like it could be the phone thinking its a virus and preventing you from downloading however this isn't my range of expertise so take my word with a grain of sand

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Ah okay its no big deal! Thank you anyway!

hello! did the new chapter help? i tried exporting it different this time

We need chapter 4! :(

HELLO! I am really sorry I'm actually working on it right now I just had irl issues and couldn't work on chapter 4, so I'm easing my way back into it if that makes sense

Not a fan of NTR but I like Felicia! Not sure if you pick up recommendations but it would be nice if there were other girls included. I will keep an eye on this game

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I am not trying to say anything but look at the gallery cough cough wink wink nudge nudge 

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OOOHHHHHHHH! Nice!

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i hope you enjoy chapter 4!

For some reason when I try booting up the game it's just a black screen

oh that's strange for what platform did you download it?

I tried downloading on my phone and for some reason it just shows me the a small pic then the game just blacks out

it could be the anti virus working on your phone because I know window defenders sees it as a virus,  however I'm not really techincal and wouldnt know the exact answer sorry :(

Oh that's fine. I'll try seeing if I can fix it smehow

Oh my god that irritates me so much why does the font make f an I comboined look like an A

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Hmm, I would like to see a path that has Lester only path and possible a switch of POV to Felicia for a clueless boyfriend alternative path.

honestly that's a really good idea, I am not sure how i could do something like that with my image of the game in the future, but I am sure i can do something!

Awesome! 😆

Hmm, I just thought up a random backstory idea for Lester, would you to hear it?

sorry for late reply! I've been busy, I'd love to hear your idea for the fun of it!

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Sorry for the late reply, stupid real life screwing me over. Anyway, I was thinking Lester could be some Felicia and MC know with them both disliking him so possible play boy and bully that hitted on Felicia constantly while pushing around MC. Here Felicia still hates the guy, but has fallen lust for his dick and the thrill of cheating sex.

Bro, keep up developing, im loving it!!

Ow, and pls, release 0.3 for free, i want to see if it is worth buying the ideia and finance the project

don't worry! saturday(or sunda) 0.3 is gonna come out for free!

That starting screen needs a lot of work. It's really ugly and makes it incredibly difficult to tell what is going on. I had to hover over icons just to realize where the start-game button was.

My recommendation: Just fake a real phone screen with icons and stuff, but make all the unclickable buttons darker or more gray'd out and leave the Messages app button bright and obvious.

Also, Maybe the whole screen should be clickable to progress messages. Decisions can just block out the screen so you can't click to progress yet until you decide what to type, but allowing full screen clickability makes it more user-friendly.

Finally, it's a decent game idea and I like the pale/goth gf character, but the AI art is really inconsistent from image to image and there isn't much build up at all to her cheating. I appreciate the pixel style, but then the art stands out even more as an odd contrast to the pixel style.

Maybe if you redrew the images in pixel form, simplified but at least created by hand instead of AI, it would mesh better with the overall pixel aesthetic.

Sorry that this was mostly criticism, but I do like the game's design and overall idea. Just some key elements took me out of the experience quite a bit.

hello! no need to apologize for criticism! I really do appreciate when people give me criticism as I am looking for ways to improve the game, I know I say this a lot but this is a demo and the biggest hurdle was trying to learn how to code in the first place (I am dumb lol), Right now I do agree the Ai art is inconsistent at points but I am always trying new images to see what works best, in the newest chapter it feels more polished and I think maybe it messes too much for the pixel style, as for hand drawn pixel art, I am not getting rid of the Ai (or at least not for the foreseeable future) but I am not against the idea of hand drawn pixel art once I feel I am good enough, I know some of the screen dialogue can get buggy but I am trying my best to work on it! again thank you for the criticism I appreciate it! 

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Nah man, programming is really difficult so don't sell yourself short. You did a pretty good job and I didn't run into any critical errors. Plus, you actually released a game, even if it's a demo. That's massive and an accomplishment.

Keep going! I look forward to seeing how you develop your skills!

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Felicia is perfect and the art style is great, not a fan of NTR Though

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Thank you for the compliments! sorry to hear you're not a fan of ntr but I understand I still appreciate you playing it!

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Another dogshit AI game. 0/10 Its very recognizable stolen from artist like ratata artstyle.

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Thank you for saving me time. You're a hero

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it's a demo I still recommend you try it but if not I understand

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If somehow the ai art is replaced with human made art I will absolutely play, but I personally can't enjoy art made entirely by ai

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no worries man I get it!

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not even a 0.1/10? :(((

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go make game for yourself, if u can making a better game then u play instead

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Your art style it's amazing, hope u make something without NTR someday, i am not into that 

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well I don't wanna say anything just yet but once I have a good workflow for this game (been stressful cause I'm new at it), I want to have another type of game that doesn't have ntr (at least not mandatory), that I can work along with this one cause making games is fun even if they have porn

I have a free membership on patreon so stay tuned there for updates! 

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it's called ai

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yeah?

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The description is pretty vague. Is NTR avoidable?

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for now, no

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are you planning on making it avoidable later?

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im not sure about making it avoidable just yet(would be fun to try) but I would make it unknown, however this is a demo  so I could just rewrite the current story all together in the coming week 

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