That starting screen needs a lot of work. It's really ugly and makes it incredibly difficult to tell what is going on. I had to hover over icons just to realize where the start-game button was.
My recommendation: Just fake a real phone screen with icons and stuff, but make all the unclickable buttons darker or more gray'd out and leave the Messages app button bright and obvious.
Also, Maybe the whole screen should be clickable to progress messages. Decisions can just block out the screen so you can't click to progress yet until you decide what to type, but allowing full screen clickability makes it more user-friendly.
Finally, it's a decent game idea and I like the pale/goth gf character, but the AI art is really inconsistent from image to image and there isn't much build up at all to her cheating. I appreciate the pixel style, but then the art stands out even more as an odd contrast to the pixel style.
Maybe if you redrew the images in pixel form, simplified but at least created by hand instead of AI, it would mesh better with the overall pixel aesthetic.
Sorry that this was mostly criticism, but I do like the game's design and overall idea. Just some key elements took me out of the experience quite a bit.
hello! no need to apologize for criticism! I really do appreciate when people give me criticism as I am looking for ways to improve the game, I know I say this a lot but this is a demo and the biggest hurdle was trying to learn how to code in the first place (I am dumb lol), Right now I do agree the Ai art is inconsistent at points but I am always trying new images to see what works best, in the newest chapter it feels more polished and I think maybe it messes too much for the pixel style, as for hand drawn pixel art, I am not getting rid of the Ai (or at least not for the foreseeable future) but I am not against the idea of hand drawn pixel art once I feel I am good enough, I know some of the screen dialogue can get buggy but I am trying my best to work on it! again thank you for the criticism I appreciate it!
Nah man, programming is really difficult so don't sell yourself short. You did a pretty good job and I didn't run into any critical errors. Plus, you actually released a game, even if it's a demo. That's massive and an accomplishment.
Keep going! I look forward to seeing how you develop your skills!
well I don't wanna say anything just yet but once I have a good workflow for this game (been stressful cause I'm new at it), I want to have another type of game that doesn't have ntr (at least not mandatory), that I can work along with this one cause making games is fun even if they have porn
I have a free membership on patreon so stay tuned there for updates!
im not sure about making it avoidable just yet(would be fun to try) but I would make it unknown, however this is a demo so I could just rewrite the current story all together in the coming week
sorry I'm not sure what the issue would be, i did a proper export with andriod, you may be lacking storage or because it's an older phone, I do know for some reason windows calls the game file a virus so maybe your phone is doing something like that
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That starting screen needs a lot of work. It's really ugly and makes it incredibly difficult to tell what is going on. I had to hover over icons just to realize where the start-game button was.
My recommendation: Just fake a real phone screen with icons and stuff, but make all the unclickable buttons darker or more gray'd out and leave the Messages app button bright and obvious.
Also, Maybe the whole screen should be clickable to progress messages. Decisions can just block out the screen so you can't click to progress yet until you decide what to type, but allowing full screen clickability makes it more user-friendly.
Finally, it's a decent game idea and I like the pale/goth gf character, but the AI art is really inconsistent from image to image and there isn't much build up at all to her cheating. I appreciate the pixel style, but then the art stands out even more as an odd contrast to the pixel style.
Maybe if you redrew the images in pixel form, simplified but at least created by hand instead of AI, it would mesh better with the overall pixel aesthetic.
Sorry that this was mostly criticism, but I do like the game's design and overall idea. Just some key elements took me out of the experience quite a bit.
hello! no need to apologize for criticism! I really do appreciate when people give me criticism as I am looking for ways to improve the game, I know I say this a lot but this is a demo and the biggest hurdle was trying to learn how to code in the first place (I am dumb lol), Right now I do agree the Ai art is inconsistent at points but I am always trying new images to see what works best, in the newest chapter it feels more polished and I think maybe it messes too much for the pixel style, as for hand drawn pixel art, I am not getting rid of the Ai (or at least not for the foreseeable future) but I am not against the idea of hand drawn pixel art once I feel I am good enough, I know some of the screen dialogue can get buggy but I am trying my best to work on it! again thank you for the criticism I appreciate it!
Nah man, programming is really difficult so don't sell yourself short. You did a pretty good job and I didn't run into any critical errors. Plus, you actually released a game, even if it's a demo. That's massive and an accomplishment.
Keep going! I look forward to seeing how you develop your skills!
Felicia is perfect and the art style is great, not a fan of NTR Though
Thank you for the compliments! sorry to hear you're not a fan of ntr but I understand I still appreciate you playing it!
Another dogshit AI game. 0/10 Its very recognizable stolen from artist like ratata artstyle.
Thank you for saving me time. You're a hero
it's a demo I still recommend you try it but if not I understand
If somehow the ai art is replaced with human made art I will absolutely play, but I personally can't enjoy art made entirely by ai
no worries man I get it!
not even a 0.1/10? :(((
go make game for yourself, if u can making a better game then u play instead
Your art style it's amazing, hope u make something without NTR someday, i am not into that
well I don't wanna say anything just yet but once I have a good workflow for this game (been stressful cause I'm new at it), I want to have another type of game that doesn't have ntr (at least not mandatory), that I can work along with this one cause making games is fun even if they have porn
I have a free membership on patreon so stay tuned there for updates!
it's called ai
yeah?
The description is pretty vague. Is NTR avoidable?
for now, no
are you planning on making it avoidable later?
im not sure about making it avoidable just yet(would be fun to try) but I would make it unknown, however this is a demo so I could just rewrite the current story all together in the coming week
Still can't install for phone....
that's really weird what does it say or are you just completely unable to play?
sorry I'm not sure what the issue would be, i did a proper export with andriod, you may be lacking storage or because it's an older phone, I do know for some reason windows calls the game file a virus so maybe your phone is doing something like that
SORRY at the time it wasn't ready for the phone but now it is!
just updated it so it should work now!